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For =fantasydreamer24 's contest, here's Nadia gazing at the far off mountains that lie across the plain. The music I chose was Vangelis's "Across the Mountains" from the soundtrack of 'Alexander'.
This is also my first digital piece!
Referred to *Ilyana88 's shading tutorial

100 themes Challenge no. 56 "Danger Ahead"

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:iconiella:
ho ho ho moar critique since you requested it :)

So first off, this is your first digital work no? Its really good overall, but I'll point out some quirks.

First off the horse, anatomy wise, veryvery good :) The only thing that seems a bit off (If I had to be really nitpicky) is the tail doesnt seem to be part of the spine. This could be a perspective issue, Im not entirely sure.

The one thing you have to avoid in digital art(again digital ART not design!), if you want to improve, is PHOTOSHOP PRE MADE BRUSHES. Theyre very very cliche and everyone notices them (i'm talking about the grass & maples)
Trust me you will create much much better backgrounds if you had to draw them yourself, despite that it would probably take you 3 more hours rather than 3 seconds.


Hope that was helpful :)
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:iconorangemonkey42:
Oh This is brilliant, i love the wind blowing the maple leaves,and the horses stripes are perfect!

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:iconunicorndreams:
aw wow this just took my breath away! ^^

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:iconmalteselizziemcgee:
Thank you. I don't think its bad considering its my first proper digital piece

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:iconunicorndreams:
its very good to say that its your first! ^^

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My new amazing Avi/icon Of my handsom character Chase:
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Was made by the lovely, *ShadiKSilence
:iconmalteselizziemcgee:
Thank god for tutorials

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:iconfantasydreamer24:
I Love it!
It looks amazing! I just really can't stop looking at it! Seriously!
Good luck! :heart:

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*Laura
:iconfantasydreamer24:
Actually I have to agree with Unidreams, it DID take my breath away!

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*Laura
:iconmalteselizziemcgee:
I'm surprised at how it turned out. I think the colours just work together

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:iconliftedwings:
I really like the color scheme here, the browns and the greens really look good together. It has a very ancient feel as well.

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